Drawn Down by the Demons
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Innocent, her face was,
Pure, was her heart,
Perhaps, it was the reason why she had to part.
A lonely dark night, she ran outside,
Unaware of the demons, she abides,
Her foot stepped away from the safe cage she was in,
Into a world of the unknown, for a spin.
Deep down, she believed,
That pure souls exist,
But was that the truth hidden beyond the mist?
The moon, she saw was on its peak,
It gleamed, not with light but it was dark and weak.
Slowly, she trudged through the path,
Through the path, that keeps humans afar.
Yet, that is where she was headed,
Lured by the demons, she was to discover,
The secrets beyond the mist, beyond where the birds hover.
So she walked.
Down the ruthless roads,
Through the lifeless trees,
Into the deepening forest,
And when she looked back, she saw the world getting darker.
Shivering, she tripped on a corpse,
A dead and bleeding body, she saw, before her pure soul,
Her hands held back,
Her feet froze to the coldness of brutality.
Through her broken eyes, she saw,
She saw the greyness of the world,
She saw the cruelty of life, being exposed.
Her heart weakened, at the vicious sight,
That moment, something changed.
Her beliefs, her innocence, her pure soul,
All collapsed at the bloodthirsty sight.
So she woke up.
From the dream world, she was living in,
Her soul grew darker,
And that was the end of humanity and the beginning of sin.
By
S.Sahana
Don't let your pure beliefs be broken by the demons hidden in your hearts.
See the brighter side to things.
#It might be night, but the moon and stars still shine.
Good work as always ;)! You are so creative and talented, setting up a higher bar with every poem of yours :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot ramsha! Glad you read my poems.. and enjoy them! Ill defenitely try writing more and improve!!
DeleteGreat poem sahana.. Keep writing 👍🏻👏
ReplyDeleteThank You mom!! Definitely will Keep writing!
DeleteDarkness are inside our heart be kindness ,keep smiling if you are killed by your loved ones♡♡♡ nice writing
ReplyDeleteRegards,
FJ
Really true..
DeleteThanks a lot for your comment!
The imagery of this poem was splendid!! Nice theme touched with great emotions, though at times it seemed that the poem lost track of its rhythm, with uneven sentence lengths. But great stuff, keep writing!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for your comment! Glad you guys suggested where to improve! I will definitely look into the rhythm in the next poem. Thanks :)
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