Tiny abandoned paws.

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A poor little soul, 
Left stranded in the middle of nowhere, 
Abandoned, in agony, 
By an extremely shameful pair. 

His bark echoed through the near forest, 
A hopeful call to reach out to his master,
Which was never heard, 
For the master himself fled away, being sorest. 

The needy soul walked, 
As the days got colder, 
For it has been days since he barked, 
And since he wagged his tiny tail,
Cause his master gave him a cold shoulder. 

His tiny paws, bruised with dirt, 
While he starved of hunger, 
His thoughts pondered to those days, 
Where his master to his rescue, was never once late. 

Slowly, he paused, 
There was no way out, he knew, 
So there he sat, waiting for his master, with pleading eyes,
Was that inhumane master ever to come? 

By SSB

"Dogs might only be here for a part of your life, 
  But for them, you are their whole life" 
Not everyone is lucky enough to have one. Don't just abandon them, that's all I ask. :) 

Comments

  1. So true! We humans don't deserve dogs at all! We need to learn a lot of things from them or any other animal. Great thoughts buddy :D

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  2. Amazing job dude!! Indeed the world would be a better place if everyone would love dogs like they deserve, unconditionally! Love your talent <3

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    1. Aww thanks! Indeed they deserve an abundance of love that never ends.

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  3. This poem is amazing, It made me love dogs even more :)

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  4. Hey great poem!! The metaphors are splendid.
    One mistake: ensure the stanzas have equal no. of lines throughout the poem ;)

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    1. Hey!
      Thanks for the comment!
      Sure yeah lol.. I keep making the same mistake! Thanks for pointing it out! Ill keep it in mind next time !

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  5. Superb Sahana. Such a heart wrenching story. I agree. Dogs are so trusting of their masters. It is so sad that some people abandon their pets. I have a pet now and I know how attached they are to us

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    1. True maam.. Dogs are actually the most loyal animals as we all know. They trust us wholeheartedly and we should never abandon them Its too cruel to do so.
      Thank you so much for your comment maam!

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  6. This shows how one can neglect the best gift that one can get

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    1. Exactly, dogs are more precious than anything. Thnks for commenting :)

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